龙调.十六字令三首:乾.坤.人--BY D.QU

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龙调.十六字令三首:乾.坤.人--BY D.QU(附中译英初稿)

十六字令: 乾
乾,
宙有初始宇无边,
能质转,
多少怨恩牵.

十六字令: 坤
坤,
开天辟地盘古遁,
江山在,
不尽豪英吞.

十六字令: 人
人,
死生遵命自古真,
三魂散,
七魄紊神焚.

D.QU 2013.11.10子夜 IN PARIS
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静谧星空 发表于 2016-2-13 00:19
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中英对译(意译)初稿:

(一)sixteen Words (Cipai name)-- (First poem)
Universe, There is an initial time, but space is not marginal.
Energy and mass can be transformed,
but how much resentment and kindness,
which have been implicated in this world?.

(二)sixteen Words (Cipai name)-- (Second poem)
Earth, Since the Big Bang of the universe Creator "Pangu" ,
had fled and disappeared.
But the Earth's mountains and water has always existed,
So led to countless heroes were swallowed in them.

(三) sixteen Words (Cipai name)--(Third poem)
Humanity, Death and survival is a fixed number,
must be complied with,
This is an eternal truth. After three kinds of yang soul dispersed,
and after seven kinds of Yin soul disorders, person's life is destroyed.

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静谧星空 发表于 2016-2-13 00:19
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读不起来就念。